Focus on the cause method.
Topic: The causes of divorces.
Specific: Lack of commitment.
More specific: Getting married too young.
Getting married too young
Narrowing the topic
- Immaturity
- Inexperience
- Lack of responsibility.
- Some couples do not know how to solve an issue.
- They do not have good communication.
Introduction
Body
Immaturity
This is one of the most common causes of divorces when getting married too young, anyone can think that marriage is simple and it's all about loving your partner, but that’s when they get wrong because you must be mature to be able to handle a marriage.
Inexperience
Some people might think that experience does not define a good marriage, and they might be right, but we cannot deny that experience can help you to avoid some problems when married.
Lack of responsibility
For some reason, women tend to be more responsible when having a relationship than men and as a young marriage it's necessary to know that the other person is being responsible and some of the time they do not feel that way so they decide to divorce.
Conclusion
Focus on the effect method
Topic: Stress impact on health
Specific: Mental issues
More specific: Physical consequences of stress in the human body.
Physical consequences of stress in the human body.
Narrowing the topic
- Headaches
- Insomnia
- Respiratory and cardiovascular issues
- Digestive problems
Introduction
Body
Headaches are one of the most common effects when stressing way too much, you won’t be able to concentrate or fully enjoy your day.
Insomnia can be caused by stress as well and it will affect you on a daily basis, you can even lose your hair, you will continuously feel irritated, moody.
Another effect of stress is respiratory and cardiovascular issues, as well as digestive problems that later can create diseases as cancer or any other problem.
Conclusion
the ideas are well developed! but I'm missing the thesis atatements in both topics :D
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